I like the lilly pads and the stream, but the gas station and car on the upper left is not good. I also think you should post larger images. It's tough to see the focus and clarity issues of which there appear to be, but I can't tell.
I think this is a really pretty marshland, but it needs better light. Unfortunately in the middle part of the day the light is really harsh and the shadows are almost nonexistent, both factors that clash a bit with the dramatic vignetting. I would revisit this place in the early morning or in the evening and see what you can find!
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