I'm not going to tell you anything new, I guess. I think you're on to something here, but the yellow is too much. I would dial it down a tad. Doesn't have to go, just a little less.
I'd also prefer some sort of crop, but to be honest, I have no idea how to crop it. I think there is too much 'white shirt' but cropping that, also means cropping his hand/arm and the glass, which would detract from the interestingness of this shot, I think
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Thanks for the suggestion.
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Well, the yellowish tint will stay since I actually made it more yellow when editing. It makes it warmer, IMO.
I'd also prefer some sort of crop, but to be honest, I have no idea how to crop it. I think there is too much 'white shirt' but cropping that, also means cropping his hand/arm and the glass, which would detract from the interestingness of this shot, I think
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