#1 - I'm on an uncalibrated lappy monitor, so take this with a grain of salt, but her makeup is really bothering me in this shot. The black is so 'black' and present that it's hard for me to look at anything else for some reason.
#2 - I think I like the setup of this shot, but the elbow missing doesn't work for me. Also, the way she has her left hand (pinky bent) it looks weird, almost as if she has a thumb and three fingers.
#3 - I like this shot, but my eyes keep going back to the boots, which are very present. Not sure if you meant for this, or not? Would be great for a boots-ad.
#4 - I definitely like this shot the best I wouldn't have mind if she smiled just a tad more, but I like it as is, also
#5 - not sure what I think about the angle. I may get back to you on it.
#6 - The black of her makeup is very present I think, as with #1, but not as much.
#4 & #6 are fantastic. The boots are not an issue to me. In #4 she has that "what are you looking at" attitude. In #6, she apperars more relaxed. Great photos of a beautiful lady.
These are great! In number one, the bottom crop is too close to the chin for me. But don't worry about that, I am practicing saying things besides these are great, which they are by the way!
#4 & #6 are fantastic. The boots are not an issue to me. In #4 she has that "what are you looking at" attitude. In #6, she apperars more relaxed. Great photos of a beautiful lady.
Thank you very much Captain. Appreciate the time and comment.:D
These are great! In number one, the bottom crop is too close to the chin for me. But don't worry about that, I am practicing saying things besides these are great, which they are by the way!
Thank you ever so much Jaye. Appreciate your time and your critique.
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#1 - I'm on an uncalibrated lappy monitor, so take this with a grain of salt, but her makeup is really bothering me in this shot. The black is so 'black' and present that it's hard for me to look at anything else for some reason.
#2 - I think I like the setup of this shot, but the elbow missing doesn't work for me. Also, the way she has her left hand (pinky bent) it looks weird, almost as if she has a thumb and three fingers.
#3 - I like this shot, but my eyes keep going back to the boots, which are very present. Not sure if you meant for this, or not? Would be great for a boots-ad.
#4 - I definitely like this shot the best
#5 - not sure what I think about the angle. I may get back to you on it.
#6 - The black of her makeup is very present I think, as with #1, but not as much.
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Yes to the boots, another one of her favorites along with the hat.
Thank you very much Captain. Appreciate the time and comment.:D
Thank you ever so much Jaye. Appreciate your time and your critique.