18+ NSFW: Ongoing feedback thread

ClubFlys

Ok.. so I have several shots which I had originally considered not to be good for addition into my progressing Nude/Bodyscape portfolio. I shared a couple of the images with some local photographers and friends. They all have expressed that the images are very good and wouldn't mind spending some money on buying large prints.

So, I figure I would post them here.. one at a time.. and gain the feedback of the veteran photogs of Dgrin. I plan to add on to this thread as I add a new potential portfolio image for feedback and critique.

Thank you in advance!

First images which I would like some feedback on...

Wineman

I am not a veteran, at least not in this subject, but I do like your photo, the light is great in my point of view, very appropriate for this situation, the background is kind of hot, but it's not bothering.

I do wish that you did not cut of her fingers... and the crop is kind of tight on the top side.

Keep it up!

Z.

ClubFlys

Thanks for the feedback. The above shots were from my first attempt at this. I kept forgetting about cutting of fingers and such. There is one shot, which I am not very fond of which does have her fingers in the frame. However, on the left side of the shot... my flash was seen in the frame as well. So I have had to crop it to keep the flash out of the frame.

I just added it to the initial post of this thread for review as well since it is the only shot from the set of similar pose that has the entire hand and upper body in frame.

Kayaking-N-SC

The lighting and the depth of the shadows on her is great in the first shot. I think you need to keep the background in mind next time. That closet door distracts from the line of her body. And the shelf(?) in the corner...

Wineman

The second shot is much better in my opinion, great light and the pose is better. love the way the breast is framed by the underwear. The pillows are a bit distracting but not much, they can easily be cropped or cloned out.

Great work!

Z.

Alexander

I prefer the landscape version, it really fills the frame very appropriately.
Good lighting and contrast, too!