DSS #10 - Need help with a title

VelvtRideVelvtRide Registered Users Posts: 364 Major grins
edited October 11, 2008 in The Dgrin Challenges
Current submission: Anguish

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I'm not sure this title conveys what I want to fit within the theme. Any and all suggestions are appreciated.

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  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited October 10, 2008
    title seems just right to me...

    my only suggestion would be...
    "is this really happening?"

    whos the model?
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  • VisualXpressionsVisualXpressions Registered Users Posts: 860 Major grins
    edited October 10, 2008
    The curled toes is the best part of this image... It really conveys the complete frustration and hopelessness of the situation...

    I would call it toe curling...

    Winston
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  • JAGJAG Super Moderators Posts: 9,088 moderator
    edited October 10, 2008
    I like the title you have...but if you want to tie it in even more how about "Slipping through my fingers!" In reference to the poem and not being able to hold onto the "sand"....very good picture. It sure sums up what we have been going through!thumb.gif
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  • VelvtRideVelvtRide Registered Users Posts: 364 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    AaronNelson wrote:

    whos the model?

    My dad. :D

    We were sitting around batting ideas back and forth for the pic.... he jumped right in to be the subject when we finally hit on that. He was so into it, too - I loved it.... he was trying to pose this way and that and asking if this or that should be in the photo... lol3.gif


    Thanks for the feedback, all. Sincerely appreciated!
  • Karrie McDKarrie McD Registered Users Posts: 372 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    VisualXpressions wrote:
    The curled toes is the best part of this image... It really conveys the complete frustration and hopelessness of the situation...

    I would call it toe curling...

    Winston


    Toes are the first thing I noticed too :D Great photo!
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    I like the title you currently have, it carries a lot of emotion with it.
    Very good image!
    Karin


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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    ic4u wrote:
    I like the title you currently have, it carries a lot of emotion with it.
    Very good image!

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    I really like it. Clear story, genuine impact. I like the way you've used the exposure/contrast etc to force our attention where you want it. And the title works for me, too - it works.
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  • KevXmanKevXman Registered Users Posts: 945 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    I agree, I don't think that you need to change a thing. Excellent effort!
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  • VelvtRideVelvtRide Registered Users Posts: 364 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    Thanks everyone! Sure boots my confidence level. clap.gif
  • NomadRipNomadRip Registered Users Posts: 180 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    Great shot all around. First thing I thought was "PANIC", but I have an eye for the blatantly obvious. :D
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  • VelvtRideVelvtRide Registered Users Posts: 364 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2008
    NomadRip wrote:
    Great shot all around. First thing I thought was "PANIC", but I have an eye for the blatantly obvious. :D

    Ditto. lol3.gif


    That was the first title I gave it. :D


    Thank you for the kind words!
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