Another #10 C&C

mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
edited October 14, 2008 in The Dgrin Challenges
Title: Can't wake up

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All C&C welcome, what do you think?

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  • The Curious CamelThe Curious Camel Registered Users Posts: 943 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2008
    I think maybe this is a good place to start.
    what about doing a shot like this without the break in the picture and instead have him moving his
    head like he's shaking it in disbelief with a slow shutter? Just a thought. Hope that helps some.
    Peace, gail
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  • mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2008
    The Curious Camel wrote:
    I think maybe this is a good place to start.
    what about doing a shot like this without the break in the picture and instead have him moving his
    head like he's shaking it in disbelief with a slow shutter? Just a thought. Hope that helps some.
    Peace, gail

    Thanks for the reply! It's actually shot into some mirrors which causes the break, I'll give that try. Should be easy because it's a slow shutter speed anyway with only red back light.
  • mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2008
    another view...

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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited October 14, 2008
    mpaulie wrote:
    another view...

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    I like this one better. The horizontal line is still a bit jarring, but much much better than the first version, especially across the actual face.

    One other thought is that the treatment across the shoulders looks kind of like teeth - if that's the effect you want then great, but if not... just thought I'd point it out :D
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