I like the pose, the look, and the feel of the shots. Good work!
The only negative I can find is that the background is super harsh to me - just a blinding white with the model only filling 1/3 of the frame or even less. Maybe a tighter crop or other modification would help it really stand out.
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I make it policy to never let ignorance stand in the way of my opinion. ~Justiceiro
"Your decisions on whether to buy, when to buy and what to buy should depend on careful consideration of your needs primarily, with a little of your wants thrown in for enjoyment, After all photography is a hobby, even for pros." ~Herbert Keppler
The coat
Love the series! BUT the last photograph does nothing for me. I think the model would look much better without looking straight into the camera. It looks like her face is lost with the hat and coat whereas in the first photograph she expresses much more with her face turned to the side. (But pretty much same position as the last). Her facial expression in the last photograph does not convey sexy nor mysterious... BUT kinda lost...
BUT your use of photographing is fantastic. I like the lighting and love the idea!!!
~If you're photographing in color you show the color of their clothes - if you use black and white, you will show the color of their soul.~ http://www.myspace.com/loubellsunrise
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The only negative I can find is that the background is super harsh to me - just a blinding white with the model only filling 1/3 of the frame or even less. Maybe a tighter crop or other modification would help it really stand out.
"Your decisions on whether to buy, when to buy and what to buy should depend on careful consideration of your needs primarily, with a little of your wants thrown in for enjoyment, After all photography is a hobby, even for pros."
~Herbert Keppler
Note: Image removed... SORRY!
Just a crop & Vignette
"Your decisions on whether to buy, when to buy and what to buy should depend on careful consideration of your needs primarily, with a little of your wants thrown in for enjoyment, After all photography is a hobby, even for pros."
~Herbert Keppler
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Yes. I think this is better. prob should make a habit of asking first tho~~
Love the series! BUT the last photograph does nothing for me. I think the model would look much better without looking straight into the camera. It looks like her face is lost with the hat and coat whereas in the first photograph she expresses much more with her face turned to the side. (But pretty much same position as the last). Her facial expression in the last photograph does not convey sexy nor mysterious... BUT kinda lost...
BUT your use of photographing is fantastic. I like the lighting and love the idea!!!
http://www.myspace.com/loubellsunrise
http://www.freespiritphotography.com/smugmug