Shoe Ortons...

Paul IddonPaul Iddon Registered Users Posts: 5,129 Major grins
edited October 30, 2008 in Other Cool Shots
I have to submit 3 photos into a quick comp at the camera club in the " 3 on a theme " category, and I wanted of course to be different from everyone else.

Racked my brains and remembered and forum buddies photo of a boot, and thought "I'll use shoes". Then used the "orton effect" to make them stand out more.

So thanks go to my friend CJ for this idea.


These are 3 photos.

shoeonrortonLarge.jpg


shoemiddleortonLarge.jpg


shoetwoortonLarge.jpg



Which makes the rotation on screen like so:

3shoesLarge.jpg


What do you think?



Paul.


Link to my personal website: http://www.pauliddon.co.uk






Comments

  • jasonstonejasonstone Registered Users Posts: 735 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2008
    I like the nice warm colours and the triptych

    If I was offer my £0.02p I'd suggest:

    1. for a triptych to really work (for me at least) I like the 3 images to be the same size - so the squarish layout of the middle shoe breaks it up too much

    2. I'd use a thinner border - maybe with a light shadow

    3. maybe slightly more space between the images - give them some breathing room

    But hey criticism is _always_ easier than getting off your bum and getting out and doing it yourself! So kudos! thumb.gif

    Be interested to see how it looks with the suggestions - maybe I'm wrong mwink.gif

    Cheers, Jase
  • Paul IddonPaul Iddon Registered Users Posts: 5,129 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2008
    Thanks Jase.

    It won't be views as a triptych, each one is viewed individually. I just added that at the end to show the order of presentation.


    Cheers for looking and your thoughts though.


    Paul.


    Link to my personal website: http://www.pauliddon.co.uk






  • jasonstonejasonstone Registered Users Posts: 735 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2008
    Paul Iddon wrote:
    It won't be views as a triptych, each one is viewed individually. I just added that at the end to show the order of presentation.
    Paul.

    In that case ignore everything I said rolleyes1.gif I think seperate they work much better!

    I'd still like to see thinner borders mwink.gif

    Cheers, Jase
  • SkippySkippy Registered Users Posts: 12,075 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2008
    Paul Iddon wrote:
    I have to submit 3 photos into a quick comp at the camera club in the " 3 on a theme " category, and I wanted of course to be different from everyone else.

    Racked my brains and remembered and forum buddies photo of a boot, and thought "I'll use shoes". Then used the "orton effect" to make them stand out more.

    So thanks go to my friend CJ for this idea.

    These are 3 photos.

    Which makes the rotation on screen like so:

    What do you think?
    Paul.

    Wow I never knew that people not putting their shoes away could make for a nice Phot Op rolleyes1.gif

    If my name was Jake the Peg I'd have a big smile on my moosh :D
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KJleJbn9G6Y

    I think your entry will do well nod.gif .... Skippy :D
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  • Paul IddonPaul Iddon Registered Users Posts: 5,129 Major grins
    edited October 30, 2008
    Heheheh, thanks Skippy...

    My daughter loved the RH vid when she saw it.

    Paul.


    Link to my personal website: http://www.pauliddon.co.uk






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