All your pictures are very sharp, but some just suffer from awkward expression or position (a little bit like the man in the red). Don't be afraid to fire off a few shots at a time.
I don't know if it will help the picture more but have you tried cropping the one where the girl is standing and looking right at you in a sea of moving people. Its just a little too much of other stuff going on but its really striking the way she is looking at you.
I agree with above and really love your last shot. It both well captured and placed within the frame and has a story going on inside of it. A very good 'people' shot.
Just take your time with it. You are getting the hang of it fine.
Cheers,
a.
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I don't know if it will help the picture more but have you tried cropping the one where the girl is standing and looking right at you in a sea of moving people. Its just a little too much of other stuff going on but its really striking the way she is looking at you.
I agree with above and really love your last shot. It both well captured and placed within the frame and has a story going on inside of it. A very good 'people' shot.
Just take your time with it. You are getting the hang of it fine.
Cheers,
a.
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