Finished images of Ashley

JulieLawsonPhotography

I finished up the gallery of Ashley and am pretty satisfied with the end results.

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Thanks in advance,

Julie

mayassa

I love shots 1,3,5

Shot 3 the reflection in the lower windows is distracting

Shot 4 just seems like to much haze and the duct tape on the window over her head looks bad could you PS it out?

Don't take my comments to much to heart I am a new at this
Rick

jeffreaux2

Very nice Julie.......thanks for sharing. I especially like #1....and it's light play.

Xandertures

I love 1 and 3. They are extremely warm and timeless looking photos. You did an excellent job!

Scott_Quier

I have to agree with the above posters - 1 and 3 are winners. I'm not liking all the lens flare too much - your shots loose a lot of contrast for the flare. Just my $.02 - FWIW.

afev0602

I always love your composition for seniors. I think you do a good job of keeping in mind who is going to be enjoying the picture.

So,,,,,in my utmost humble opinion--I don't think the girl will like 1. Coloring and composition is great--her eyes are stunning and the clarity is so pretty, but she has that hair thing going on and teenage girls have very little tolerance over hair issues. I could be wrong though

I think she'll really like 2 and 4--again, cause she's a teenager. I like 4 but I do wish the coloring were different.

I really like number 3 the best. And if I were her mamma I would like the last one best--it has a nostalgic little girl feel to it.

JulieLawsonPhotography

Scott_Quier wrote:

I have to agree with the above posters - 1 and 3 are winners. I'm not liking all the lens flare too much - your shots loose a lot of contrast for the flare. Just my $.02 - FWIW.

I have been trying to flare for so long that when I was able to achieve it...I kind of went nuts with it. I'm not sure if the girl will like those much or understand what I was trying to achieve. eh? What can you do.

Swartzy

Hi Julie! I love #1...so pretty. I agree a little bit about the overall haze but those are still really cool. Gives them a "unique" look. So often looking at things from a photographer's standpoint, we miss the "feel" of the shot because of technicalities. I would imagine she would love them. #3 is a nice setting.....she just needs...um...maybe a bit different pose and facial expression. Very well processed throughout. Nice job.

cdonovan

I wonder if a sepia or b&w treatment on #4 would give it a better feel...

GP Images

hmmmmm......I like them all except #5?? Just me I guess....I don't like the bra straps and the angle is not flattering to her...it almost looks like she is pregnant.