Model Portfolio Attempts

BridgeCity

So I spent a couple hours with a good friend of mine attempting to come up with a few shots for his modeling portfolio. This is my first attempt, and I have no idea what the agencies are looking for, but I thought I may as well take a stab at it. If we came up with something good, it would be free for him

The first two are for a jeans add for Versace and the third is for his SportsU portfolio.

What do people think? Do I need to go back to the drawingboard?

Thanks in advance