I like the B&W, but the composition looks too centered for my taste. Also the whites seem a bit too white in certain areas (face and shirt, more precisely right above the girl on left's right breast). There's not a whole lot of detail in the white shirt, even though I think the shirt itself does. So maybe try and bring some of that out?
The emotion in the girl on the right though is beautiful and the expression on the girl on the left is great. From what I can see, and I'd have to see the final result to get any more ideas, or maybe the ones I gave wouldn't look good put into motion. So yeah. That's my .02.
Candid arts, Thanks for looking and commenting. I'm not a fan of the centered look myself but given that people were on both sides it was a bit difficult and I did the best I could with what I had. I'll try and play with the PP a bit after the holidays.
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The emotion in the girl on the right though is beautiful and the expression on the girl on the left is great. From what I can see, and I'd have to see the final result to get any more ideas, or maybe the ones I gave wouldn't look good put into motion. So yeah. That's my .02.
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