Through the woods...

BBiggsBBiggs Registered Users Posts: 688 Major grins
edited December 28, 2008 in Landscapes
... on a snowy path :)

1) original shot
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2) redone image from advice received.
444134010_GB2ks-XL.jpg
C and C is welcomed!
Brenton
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  • Mohamed.GhuloomMohamed.Ghuloom Registered Users Posts: 305 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    WoW man wOw!! Simply great, and perfect! thumb.gif It's so clear and awesome.. I'll put it as my background, just can't resist..

    If you could little get lower and take the shout it would even look greater!
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    Very nice
    Interesting location !
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  • BBiggsBBiggs Registered Users Posts: 688 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    Mohamed.Ghuloom wrote:
    WoW man wOw!! Simply great, and perfect! thumb.gif It's so clear and awesome.. I'll put it as my background, just can't resist..

    If you could little get lower and take the shout it would even look greater!

    Thanks!!! I appreciate the kind words!!! :)
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  • BBiggsBBiggs Registered Users Posts: 688 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    Awais Yaqub wrote:
    Very nice
    Interesting location !

    Thanks so much Awais!!!
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  • digital2006digital2006 Registered Users Posts: 35 Big grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    I think this is a beautiful scene...i love how the snow is to the
    left and right of the path. I wish i could see more of those trees.
    It's just cut off a little bit to low. Very nice capture.
    Marty
  • BBiggsBBiggs Registered Users Posts: 688 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    digital2006 wrote:
    I think this is a beautiful scene...i love how the snow is to the
    left and right of the path. I wish i could see more of those trees.
    It's just cut off a little bit to low. Very nice capture.

    Thanks Marty! I was on my way out of the park when I took this, when I go back there I will reshoot this scene! :)
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  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2008
    This scene is beautiful, but I think there are several more possibilities for you. I agree that the trees are cut off just a bit too much. When you go back, perhaps you could shoot multiple angles and views and you might hit on just the right one. I love the color and the scene--it has the possibility of being superb!
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  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited December 27, 2008
    I agree the colors and textures are very good. The path is seemingly flowing like water.

    However the POV is too sharp. It's like you're shooting at your feet.

    Get down lower and shoot higher. Let the soaring trees give lift to the captured image.

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  • Dooginfif20Dooginfif20 Registered Users Posts: 845 Major grins
    edited December 27, 2008
    I love the shot! I would try shooting in portrait and see how it looks!
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  • BBiggsBBiggs Registered Users Posts: 688 Major grins
    edited December 27, 2008
    Thank you all. It seems I have messed up a bit, but I am going to reshoot that scene when I go back to the park!!! :)

    Here is a new version:

    443837430_EmPJQ-XL.jpg
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  • BBiggsBBiggs Registered Users Posts: 688 Major grins
    edited December 28, 2008
    redone image posted in original message! Thanks!!! :)
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