i really like it.. it all works very well together for me..some small but grat things you did well...the little one looking at you directly (this can be like pulling teeth)...the little ones pants aren't all pulled up (an unfortunately situation in most babies pictures where they are being held)..great job...
I like the high contrast-but-soft look, very nice. The faces look slightly overexposed with some blown-out hightlights, though. Might be what you were going for... not my thing though. Other than that, it's a good look.
Its a nice look. Id personally like to see a bit more of the truck. We only have a steering wheel to identify it as a vehicle. The one thing I don't particularly like is her shoes. I find them to be a strong distraction. Its possible you could either tone down the contrast of the pattern....or do away with it altogether in processing. Of course....the young lady pictured might not like that.....we all know how gals feel about their shoes!
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I've found some people like this type of processing some don't