Brown Pelican - #16 Challenge

EvaLSeraphimEvaLSeraphim Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
edited January 13, 2009 in Wildlife
I made it one of my goals for 2009 to participate in each of the challenges offered as a way to improve my photography. So, without further ado, any thoughts for improving this one? Many thanks in advance.

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  • HarrybHarryb Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 22,708 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    Its a nice action capture. The shoreline looks to have a slight tilt to the upper right. I would also try to recover the highlights in the pelican. I would also go for a tighter crop on the capture.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2009
    Harryb wrote:
    Its a nice action capture. The shoreline looks to have a slight tilt to the upper right. I would also try to recover the highlights in the pelican. I would also go for a tighter crop on the capture.

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  • EvaLSeraphimEvaLSeraphim Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
    edited January 13, 2009
    Thank you
    Thanks so much to you both for the suggestions. I'll give that a go today (been out of town).
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