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CBec2003CBec2003 Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
edited January 9, 2009 in People
I finally came to the dark side and am in the process of uploading my pictures to smugmug. would love some constructive feedback on one of my recent favorites.


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thank you,

http://cbec2003.smugmug.com/

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  • mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    Welcome to dgrin!

    Very nice photo, I like the composition. One thing that looks off to me though is that the whites of the eyes look like they have a blue tint to them. Maybe a warmer white balance will help.
  • CBec2003CBec2003 Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    Thanks
    Great point, i will try that!
    mpaulie wrote:
    Welcome to dgrin!

    Very nice photo, I like the composition. One thing that looks off to me though is that the whites of the eyes look like they have a blue tint to them. Maybe a warmer white balance will help.
    thank you,

    http://cbec2003.smugmug.com/
  • clemensphoto'sclemensphoto's Registered Users Posts: 647 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    15524779-Ti.gif Very nice shotclap.gif
    Ryan Clemens
    www.clemensphotography.us
    Canon 7D w/BG-E7 Vertical Grip, Canon 50D w/ BG-E2N Vertical Grip, Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L USM, Canon 18-55mm, Canon 580EX II Flash and other goodies.
    Ignorance is no excuss, so lets DGrin!
  • GP ImagesGP Images Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    Very nice shot but the first thing I noticed was the blue in his eyes also. Welcome to dgrin!
    http://gpimages.smugmug.com/
    My blog: HERE
  • CBec2003CBec2003 Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    eyes are warmer
    I warmed up the eyes only, because i like the cooler feel of the overall photo. does it look weird now?

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    thank you,

    http://cbec2003.smugmug.com/
  • JeriAmrineJeriAmrine Registered Users Posts: 62 Big grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    I actually like your edit better! great shot!
    Jeri

    www.jeriamrinephotography.com

    Gear: Canon XTi, some Canon lenses, a few filters, lights and other gadgets I'm not quite sure how to use...yet!

    Always wanting new glass....

  • mpauliempaulie Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    15524779-Ti.gif

    Nice improvement!
  • DerweissehaiDerweissehai Registered Users Posts: 124 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2009
    Great photo. The re-edit looks better around the eyes.
    7D/40D/XTi/G10/EOS630/50MM 1.8/430/580x2/18-55/28-135/PWx2/Sekonic LM/Tam. 70-200 2.8
    Model Site/Portrait Site/Flcikr/MM

    Adam
  • Mike JMike J Registered Users Posts: 1,029 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2009
    The re-edit is an improvement but I think there still is a blue cast in the eyes? Have you tried just whitening the eyes?
    Mike J

    Comments and constructive criticism always welcome.
    www.mikejulianaphotography.com
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