Self Portrait - Opinion on B & W treatment

Trevlan · January 9, 2009

Didn't like the picture in color much. Not to crazy about the border I applied. But over all, I like the B & W conversion. What do you guys think?

sweet caroline · January 9, 2009

Yes, lose the border. Otherwise, I like it. It would look cool with a subtle vinette, and a little more grain, but that's a matter of personal style. I usually end up with several different versions my photos I like.

Caroline

Travis · January 9, 2009

I really like this conversion. The B&W adds to the emotion of the image. The border doesn't necessarily bother me; however, the fact that you are not crazy about it immediately says loose it. The image should be an extension of your vision. Unless a client is specifically looking for something different, then you are the most important client.

Trevlan · January 9, 2009

At first I liked the border, but after I viewed it a few more times, I'm niether here or there. Thanks for the comments guys. When are we going to see more SP of you Caroline?

divamum · January 9, 2009

I really like the conversion, but agree that you need to lose the border - it makes me look at your ear before the rest of the picture

It reminds me of the mood/look of some of the James Dean bw's (particularly the cigarette pose) - if that's the look you were going for, you nailed it!

mpaulie · January 9, 2009

Very nice composition Frank! I'm on the fence whether I would like your face to be more in focus or your hand as is, but that's my personal taste.

Trevlan · January 9, 2009

The verdict is in the border is gone when I get home. And the focus of the shot was actually the action of my hand and the cigarette I'm lighting. You can't see what I'm doing, but I'm sure you know what I'm doing. That was my what I intended to do. Tell the story without telling the story.

I'll loose the border, add a little more film grain and hopefully I have a selfportrait winner. Thanks for all of your comments! I'll post the final shot when I get around to processing it tonight. Enjoy your day.

Tim Kamppinen · January 9, 2009

Very nice high-key portrait, and I agree about losing the border. I found it distracting.

Trevlan · January 16, 2009

Okay, I got rid of the border and I added a little more film grain. Thanks guys!

Shootin1st · January 16, 2009

Didn't see the prior version, but this one is at or near the top of the heap.

WingsOfLovePhoto · January 16, 2009

From my monitor a touch more contrast? But I agree it looks good in black and white and I like the crop. But you didn't your momma ever tell you not to smoke?

Keep em coming....

Mike J · January 16, 2009

Shootin1st wrote:

Didn't see the prior version, but this one is at or near the top of the heap.

I didn't see it either by I really like the feel of this one.

Flyinggina · January 16, 2009

Very, very nice!

Virginia

Trevlan · January 18, 2009

Thanks a lot guys! I removed the old shot from my smugmug. I should have had them side by side for you to compare. But I love this one better than the other one. Thanks for the input. And thanks for the wonderful comments.

Scott_Quier · January 18, 2009

I don't know how I missed this one - it's been up a week and I'm just now seeing it

I like the B&W treatment and the rather high-key processing and the grain. These all work quite well.

What is blowing the image for me as a self-portrait is the focus. To my mind, a self-portrait (or any portrait for that matter) should talk about the person depicted. With this image, our focus is drawn to the hand because it's in sharpest focus and at the front of the image. Next we are lead to the the cigarette, and from there, finally, to the face.

So the question, for me, becomes, "Is this photo about smoking? Or is it about a person, who just happens to be smoking at the time?"

Self Portrait - Opinion on B & W treatment

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