Late but hopefully not to much for some suggestions?

The Curious CamelThe Curious Camel Registered Users Posts: 943 Major grins
edited January 11, 2009 in Other Cool Shots
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I was thinking of entering this shot for the Challenge ^16


I didn't know where to place this for suggestions so I opted here.

Thank, gail

Comments

  • LlywellynLlywellyn Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,186 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    I like the composition and warmth, but I find myself distracted by the smidge of able on the bottom cutting off the bottom of the frame and the reflection of the lamp in the curtain. I do like those lines in the background, too. thumb.gif
  • JAGJAG Super Moderators Posts: 9,088 moderator
    edited January 11, 2009
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    Also the lamp is just a smidge leaning to the left. Although I don't know if you can adjust that without loosing the rest of the table edge and bottom of the picture frame.
  • The Curious CamelThe Curious Camel Registered Users Posts: 943 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    I tried to fix the reflection but I would have to reshoot now and I can't
    I did try to fix the other things is it any better?

    Thanks Kerry and Jag


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