DSS16 - Blargh. Just Blargh.

LlywellynLlywellyn Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,186 Major grins
edited January 12, 2009 in The Dgrin Challenges
Been a while since I've posted for feedback here, but that's usually because I'm too lazy to have more than one shot as an option. :deal

I was originally going to use this...

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Then came up with a couple variations of this...

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Until someone I suggested all three variations together presented a better story...

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And now I'm just stuck...

...and using an inordinate amount of ellipses...

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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    But the ellipsis is THE single most valuable form of punctuation ... ever... :D
    Moving right along.

    I think both the filmstrips are pretty neat - the three-fer is downright creepy, but very effective (is that your Poe streak coming out again?!). I think, ultimately, that's the version I prefer - the "surprise" at the end of it suddenly breaking the repetition is pretty way cool, actually :)

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  • LlywellynLlywellyn Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,186 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    Thanks, diva. :D The three-fer fascinates me, too. I only wish that was actually my idea. It was a brilliant suggestion by another Dgrinner. bowdown.gif
  • heatherfeatherheatherfeather Registered Users Posts: 2,738 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    I think my fav individual photo of the set is your "evil eye" at the end. It just cracks me up! Though I do like your tomatoes but feel bad for the one in the middle.

    What I think you should enter: the last set with aaaall the photos.

    (and I never knew "..." was called ellipses! I always called it "dot dot dot". The things I learn on this forum astound me again!)

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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    Llywellyn wrote:
    Thanks, diva. :D The three-fer fascinates me, too. I only wish that was actually my idea. It was a brilliant suggestion by another Dgrinner. bowdown.gif

    Oh I dunno, the Rotten Tomatoes are pretty brilliant too!
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  • LlywellynLlywellyn Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,186 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    heatherfeather wrote:
    I think my fav individual photo of the set is your "evil eye" at the end. It just cracks me up! Though I do like your tomatoes but feel bad for the one in the middle.
    Hee! It gives me a giggle, too. I ended up using just that frame for my daily today :D:

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    divamum wrote:
    Oh I dunno, the Rotten Tomatoes are pretty brilliant too!
    You're too sweet for your own good. iloveyou.gif
  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    Llywellyn wrote:
    You're too sweet for your own good. iloveyou.gif

    Nah, I just share your warped sense of humour. I still want to see that reshot with the shadow of the celery STALKer over them.... :D
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  • slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,215 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    I thought the tomato shot was really funny. It definitely made me laugh. The other one is probably more powerful though.

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  • coscorrosacoscorrosa Registered Users Posts: 2,284 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2009
    These are great, wonderfully creative! I can't decide between #1 and #3.
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  • JAGJAG Super Moderators Posts: 9,088 moderator
    edited January 11, 2009
    Kerry...one could interpret these as being paranoia....but then...I see them as being brilliant!:D

    They both can evoke an emotion...which is great. Both on a different level. The tomatos being an easier emotion for me than the knife in the back which hurts just to look at it (that is ment for a compliment...very moving)!

    I have a hard time to choosing between 1 and 3 also...with 3 having a stronger emotion for me.
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  • clemensphoto'sclemensphoto's Registered Users Posts: 647 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2009
    I think if #2 had a blood splater frame (second to the last frame) it would work better. I'd have to go with #1.
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  • TentacionTentacion Registered Users Posts: 940 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2009
    Laughing.gif that last one reminds me of a movie by Alfred Hitchcock..PSYCHO.

    Love the Tomatoes...Don't you ever feel like that tomatoe....surrounded by people, and never knowing who your friends are??
    You're only as good as your next photo....
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