This weekend with Kess. (NSFW)

Derweissehai · January 20, 2009

Nikolai · January 20, 2009

I like the dynamics of #1, great pose!
And the minimalistic lighting on #2 make it almost implied:-)
Good series!

glennp · January 20, 2009

Like your lighting in both.

glenn

Derweissehai · January 21, 2009

Thanks. More to follow and will be on flickr and a private link on my sm page

Richard · January 21, 2009

In #1, I'm a little bothered by the angularity of her right shoulder. It seems like a forced position.

Could be my monitor, but I would like to see a little more light on her neck in that area.

angevin1 · January 21, 2009

Nice set Adam!

And the way that light gently and subtly wraps around her in #2 is awesome~

cheers, tom

Derweissehai · January 21, 2009

Richard wrote:

In #1, I'm a little bothered by the angularity of her right shoulder. It seems like a forced position. Could be my monitor, but I would like to see a little more light on her neck in that area.

That was actually a candid capture in between posing. I liked it.

Padge · January 21, 2009

Both poses look very forced, in the first her right arm looks like its going to come out of its joint. I feel something more relaxed would have been better.

The second one its the left leg, would have been better with her foot on the floor.

Good light, but a couple of small things. Regarding pic 1. The shadow of the chair curves up following the backdrop, looks a bit odd. I know, I know, lovely girl to look at and somebody studies the shadows of a chair. Also to be picky about number 2 the top of the right thigh may need a bit of burn to tone it down a little.

Derweissehai · January 22, 2009

Padge wrote:

Both poses look very forced, in the first her right arm looks like its going to come out of its joint. I feel something more relaxed would have been better.

The second one its the left leg, would have been better with her foot on the floor.

Good light, but a couple of small things. Regarding pic 1. The shadow of the chair curves up following the backdrop, looks a bit odd. I know, I know, lovely girl to look at and somebody studies the shadows of a chair. Also to be picky about number 2 the top of the right thigh may need a bit of burn to tone it down a little.

Figure studies....the shadows add to the depth and perception of the photos. Don't need the infinity look on these...but I see what you are saying.

This weekend with Kess. (NSFW)

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