Did you do anything to lighten her teeth?
Sorry, but it looked like you put some effort into retouching skin and even tooth texture, but the tooth color really distracted me. It shouldn't (i.e.: I shouldn't be so whatever), but it did.
Otherwise I liked #2 and would have liked #1 better than #2 if the overall color hadn't been quite do done.
Then again, I'm just a relative noob, who even spells noob wrong.
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I really like the joy you caught in #1 and #2. As others have said, the lighting is superb. For me, the what appears to be highly processed eyes work for me in #1 and #2 but any further you would lose me on #1.
Would #4 better if there was at least some profile?
Hey, thanks for all of the feedback.. and no, I have not done anything at all to the teeth. And I did not soften skin on number 1.. she's got really smooth skin. Thanks for all the feedback.. and if you have another border you think would look good, let me know.. I don't have very many borders... and I don't really even need to use borders.. but I kinda like them. But thanks again. All 25 pictures from that shoot are on my site at www.jondraperphotography.smugmug.com
Also, number three is supposed to be a kinda David Hill or Mark Flemings look.. the kind of hand painted or grunged look.. Not real sure how to describe it. So thats why her skin kinda looks dirty.. I didn't really clean that up very well.. and thats my bad.. but yeah. Thanks for the feedback again
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Border doesn't work for me though
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I don't understand the processing in your third shot though. It makes her face/skin look dirty. Maybe she is a tad cool in the shot as well...??
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Sorry, but it looked like you put some effort into retouching skin and even tooth texture, but the tooth color really distracted me. It shouldn't (i.e.: I shouldn't be so whatever), but it did.
Otherwise I liked #2 and would have liked #1 better than #2 if the overall color hadn't been quite do done.
Then again, I'm just a relative noob, who even spells noob wrong.
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If responding to a picture I've posted: please, provide constructive criticism. Destructive criticism can go take a flying leap.
If we don't know what could be improved or could have been done differently, we'll never know how to get better at what we're doing.
Would #4 better if there was at least some profile?
Comments and constructive criticism always welcome.
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