My very good friend........Kelly

kwaichi

These pictures were shot at my friend's studio. I am still trying to be better with the lights setup so I really appreciate your inputs and any comments about the pictures.

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Thanks,
Edward:wink

Flutist

Nice series. I would do a little cleanup on her bicep in pic 5. Vaccine mark maybe?

Agnieszka

Very pretty lady, nice set!

zoomer

She is a knockout. Really nice poses and nice shots, I really like them.
I can't really critique technically cause I am viewing these on my *&^% work monitor.

kwaichi

Flutist wrote:

Nice series. I would do a little cleanup on her bicep in pic 5. Vaccine mark maybe?

Thanks Flutist...........yeah that actually was a birth mark that's why I didn't cover it

kwaichi

Agnieszka wrote:

Very pretty lady, nice set!

Thanks Angie

kwaichi

Thanks JLW for your comments. We were experimenting different angles with the lights and try to see which styles I like the most. I will try your suggestions next time

kwaichi

any more comments?

evoryware

2 & 4 are my faves!
Composition-wise the only one I'm not crazy about is #5. SHe seems slumped over, and yet stiff, and too forward in the frame so uncomfortable.
Lighting-wise I like the lighting on her front in all, but other than 1 & 2, I think the hairlight is too strong. As strong as it is on #3 I'm expecting it to light the left side of her head. #5 her body and the background falls off too dark in front of her. I guess I'm expecting a more even rim around her whether from a rim light or from a background light.