Rethinking my entry

sweet caroline

I played with the colors a little. I do not have a calibrated monitor, so I need a little help. Here' s my current entry:



Here's a slightly different version:



Opinions? The first one has more green. Her skin actually has an olive undertone, but I can't tell whether it comes across as too green in my current submission.

Caroline

angevin1

I thought the first was very good as is, but after viewing the second, I do see what you mean.
And I like the revised version, #2 better. I didn't think this photo could get any better, but I see you proved me wrong!

This portrait for me is exquisite...just the right amount of softness, and composition is perfect too.

tom