Magazine Ads

SCP

I am working on a ad for a HighGloss Magazine. This is for my business.




Thoughts?

Yes I have taken into consideration the page fold on both the outside edges.

Angelo

that font is very busy. I don't happen to like it but if you're set on using it I would limit it to the title and use a much simpler font for the body text.

a) you're forcing the text to run through the ad rather than constraining it and allowing the images to dominate

b) I wouldn't post prices

c) "for information..." not necessary - isn't it obvious?

d) if your email address is on your website you don't need it repeated in the ad

SCP

Alright let me make the font a simpler font.

The prices should probably be displayed. This is going in a Stallion Directory where the prices are usually,if not always displayed. Adding my prices Would flow better in the magazine.

my personal thoughts.. I like to see prices. If there aren't prices I usually skip the ad.

Let me fix those fonts.

SCP

Version 2

SCP

Yahooooo!!!!
Because of my above Ad I posted for feedback on my Horse board I was hired to design another ad for the same Magazine.

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(Not excited at all..)