DSS#19 take 2

Velvet-Art

Ok, so I had a small flash of inspiration, well a dim "blip" anyway, and came up with another idea.

My title for it is "My Contrived Diet"



So, what does everybody think of this one?

Does it fit the theme enough?


Tim

cj99si

Nice looking eggs!

It kinda bothers me that the bottles are cut off. Also my eye doesn't know where to land if that makes sense. Any more angles maybe a little tighter?

So did you eat it?

Candid Arts

cj99si wrote:

Also my eye doesn't know where to land if that makes sense.

I had the same issue.

JAG

ok ok...did you know I actually thought "why does he have a glass of olive oil next to his plate?" Then I noticed that one bottle was bushmills and the glass has the same....I didn't reconize that name as an oil so looked it up. Wiskey! I had to smile as that definately is a contrived "healthy" meal. With that said...you might consider reshooting and remove the oil from the picture. It doesnt add anything but confuses to those of us who dont know our liquore. I also agree there needs to be a different angle or focal point with the rest of the elements in the background or playing somewhat secondary to that point.

Velvet-Art

Thanks for your comments guys, I see what you mean about the bottles and the angle, I had another angle from the shoot, I just processed it and here it is.



Any better?

Tim