Looking Glass

RoadkillRoadkill Registered Users Posts: 494 Major grins
edited March 1, 2009 in Other Cool Shots
I have mixed emotions about this one... so how about some C&C Please

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Comments

  • AzzaroAzzaro Registered Users Posts: 5,643 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2009
    I like itthumb.gif...... Wish I shot it......... I would crop out the black on the right side and a enough off the top to get rid of the black.. IMO It takes away from the pic.. I think that it is a little soft, and I would play around with levels or whatever your comfortable with, and try to get a little more pop to it.

    azzaro
  • RoadkillRoadkill Registered Users Posts: 494 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2009
    Thanks Azzaro... great suggestions

    Ok, so I wouldn't lose that crooked look I widend the frame around the mirror so when I tightened the crop I would still have some wood frame. Then adjusted curves a smidge and upped the contrast and saturation also.

    Re-Work

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  • AzzaroAzzaro Registered Users Posts: 5,643 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2009
    I wasn't suggesting to get rid of the crooked look, I like that..... Just crop it tighter. Leave the picture like it is but crop the picture so the black is gone......

    I like what you did, but you might try the tighter crop so you can compare.

    azzaro
  • EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
    edited February 26, 2009
    I like the second...cool and fun!:D
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  • clcoroniosclcoronios Registered Users Posts: 78 Big grins
    edited February 26, 2009
    Agree with Azzarro - wish I'd taken it!!! But now that you've given us both the thought.....

    I like the crop you did. Cool shot!

    Carol
    Carol Lynn Coronios
    As You Like It Productions
    Equine photography in the northeast
    Chatham, NY
  • pyrypyry Registered Users Posts: 1,733 Major grins
    edited February 27, 2009
    I like this, and the re-worked version even more, the added contrast was just the ticket :D
    Creativity's hard.

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,954 moderator
    edited February 28, 2009
    pyry wrote:
    I like this, and the re-worked version even more, the added contrast was just the ticket :D

    I agree that the second version is better, though I like the original as well. Nice job of faking the frame in the revision. Well done. thumb.gif
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  • pathfinderpathfinder Super Moderators Posts: 14,703 moderator
    edited February 28, 2009
    Here is a simple crop of the black area, with a bit of a curve to lighten her face, and sharpened a bit with a high pass filter

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  • clcoroniosclcoronios Registered Users Posts: 78 Big grins
    edited March 1, 2009
    Nice, pathfinder. I forgot about high-pass filter....

    Carol
    Carol Lynn Coronios
    As You Like It Productions
    Equine photography in the northeast
    Chatham, NY
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