Railroad Modeling Shoot

soloshootersoloshooter Registered Users Posts: 46 Big grins
edited March 20, 2009 in People

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  • soloshootersoloshooter Registered Users Posts: 46 Big grins
    edited March 19, 2009
    Ooops!
    I am new to this posting thing, sorry. This pic was taken with natural light on the end of a series of railroad box cars. The model was a great sport and was easy to work with.

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  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited March 20, 2009
    What is killing it for me is the awkward reach to the wheel, the blown out highlights leaving no facial definition and overall compositon. The train is in focus, red, then this person is half out of the frame with a cig in her mouth (doesn't add to the effect honestly). Sorry for my candid comments but I'm sure you've got better from a day's shoot.
    Swartzy:
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