Barbed Wire - Revisions need C&C

redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
edited March 23, 2009 in Other Cool Shots
Based on some great feedback from Azzaro, Richard, and Anonymouscuban, I cropped my barbed wire photo and tried to fade the strand into the background. Please let me know what you think about these versions.

Link to previous thread: http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=124955

Thanks, Lauren

1. Closer view of barb; cropped to put barb in bottom left third; faded strand
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2. Rotated and cropped to put barb in bottom right third; faded strand
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"But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

Lauren Blackwell
www.redleashphoto.com

Comments

  • catspawcatspaw Registered Users Posts: 1,292 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2009
    I like this a LOT more. the focus of the 'barb' follows the rule of 3rd quite nicely and the fading job is very good too (whomever suggested that clap.gif ).
    //Leah
  • AzzaroAzzaro Registered Users Posts: 5,643 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2009
    I think that is better.....Would you mind if I showed you what I see... It is hard to explain in writing.......You are IMO headed in the right direction.....
  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2009
    Azzaro--I would be grateful if you would show me. I actually really enjoy shooting barbed wire fences and I'd like to have some good ideas before I go out next time, so I am open to your suggestions.

    Thanks, Leah!
    "But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

    Lauren Blackwell
    www.redleashphoto.com
  • Daver2112Daver2112 Registered Users Posts: 157 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2009
    Excellent work!!!thumb.gif
  • AzzaroAzzaro Registered Users Posts: 5,643 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2009
    Lauren.....I think you are shooting some really good stuff....the idea, lighting and bg is yours, all I did was change the composition a little.

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    This is another one you did .... all I did was change it from a portrait format to a landscape...everything else you did...YOU HAVE REALLY GOOD STUFF ... THINK COMPOSITION.. azzaro
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