DSS#21 Go with it...or scrap it? Opinions?

ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
edited April 2, 2009 in The Dgrin Challenges
Hi everyone, been out of town but finally got a chance to work on this.
Wondering what anyone thinks...should I go with it??Improvements?? or should I try something else.
Your opinions are greatly appreciated.
Thanks, Karin

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Karin


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  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2009
    great perspective and feels just right for your discriptions...

    my only thought would to add a BG color box to the "Journey" same as you have behind the lower discription....

    i think the grass conflicts with the titles letters


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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2009
    Very nice! Pedantic note: you left out an apostrophe - it should be "teen's" :D
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  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2009
    Great photo and concept!!! Just the way the feet are placed, to me, tells a part of the story right there. It is a book I would pick up and read.
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  • Cygnus StudiosCygnus Studios Registered Users Posts: 2,294 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2009
    Looks like an easy book to judge by its cover thumb.gif
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2009
    Wow, thanks everyone for your encouraging comments!:D

    Aaron, I see what you are saying...I will play around with it some more and see if I can do it justice. Thanks for your advice!

    Diva-okay, I must admit I had to dictionary.com the word pedantic!
    I was hoping someone would correct me if I was wrong, because I wasn't 100% sure, so thank you, thank you!

    Donna and Cygnus studios, thanks for your feedback! I'm glad it comes across as I had hoped.
    Karin


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  • TylwyddTylwydd Registered Users Posts: 190 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2009
    Nice cover ! Agree with AaronNelson on the bg box. It's a book I'd look at (if not buy)
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2009
    Tylwydd wrote:
    Nice cover ! Agree with AaronNelson on the bg box. It's a book I'd look at (if not buy)

    Thanks Sam, I did make some adjustments and entered my photo, but I seem to be having a stumbling block envisioning the BG for the title, and therefore everything I've tried looks dumb! I will keep playing around with it as time permits... thanks for the feedback!
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2009
    then maybe clone out some of the grass that is up therene_nau.gif
    Aaron Nelson
  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2009
    AaronNelson wrote:
    then maybe clone out some of the grass that is up therene_nau.gif

    That is one of the adjustments I made on my entry, can you look at it and tell me if it is better?

    ETA...entry is on page 2
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
  • DrinDrin Registered Users Posts: 139 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2009
    I think it's really good. Maybe too good... rolleyes1.gif
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited April 2, 2009
    Drin wrote:
    I think it's really good. Maybe too good... rolleyes1.gif

    Oh, you are much to kind!, thank you for the compliment:D
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
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