This is a really good portrait!! I wouldn't change a thing. But I would try a couple of variations for other shots. One that would bounced the sligtest amont of light up from in front of and below her face. An another with not quit so much light on her left side. Great work!! Her parents should be very happy with this.
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REALLY nice work. beautiful lighting and control of exposure. Framing looks good too. Maybe lighten the eyes a little in photoshop? just nit picking really, great work!
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Well lit, good compesition, and great blurred background.
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I visited your website and see that you do some ski racing photos. I started doing some this year and had a blast. Hopefully next year some more orders will come about.
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Thanks everyone.
Yes, I agree about the slightly dark eye sockets, I should have used a reflector underneath I think.
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