Old & Sentimental... and needs crit
This is another shot of Fiona, my niece. It was taken when I was home in Melbourne last October. It was one of the first half-dozen shots I took with the 135mm f2 L USM which I had just bought. New lens, new camera, beautiful model. New photographer - not so good photographs. Doncha pine for the lost innocence?! That's the 'old' part.
Fiona was reluctant, but I used my best camera-side manner (also new) on her and she graciously acquiesced. Thanks Fiona! We decided we would do some shots to send to her boyfriend who is a sailor and was then at sea (not as much as me!), so for this shot she put on the jewellery which he had given her, earrings, pendant, ring. That's the 'sentimental' part.
The 'crit' part? That's over to you!
Obvioulsy, I've PP'ed, and I might have made a mess. I think it's better than SOOC, but maybe a lot worse than it could be?
Canon 40D, 135mm f2 L USM
Thanks for looking and your wisdom, after which I am never the same.:wink
Neil
Fiona was reluctant, but I used my best camera-side manner (also new) on her and she graciously acquiesced. Thanks Fiona! We decided we would do some shots to send to her boyfriend who is a sailor and was then at sea (not as much as me!), so for this shot she put on the jewellery which he had given her, earrings, pendant, ring. That's the 'sentimental' part.
The 'crit' part? That's over to you!
Obvioulsy, I've PP'ed, and I might have made a mess. I think it's better than SOOC, but maybe a lot worse than it could be?Canon 40D, 135mm f2 L USM
Thanks for looking and your wisdom, after which I am never the same.:wink
Neil
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