I'm no Yuri...

AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
edited June 3, 2005 in People
...but how'd I do?

Please meet Lily.
www.angelo.smugmug.com

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  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited June 2, 2005
    Angelo wrote:
    ...but how'd I do?

    Please meet Lily.
    in b/w
    www.angelo.smugmug.com

    Moderator of: Location, Location, Location , Mind Your Own Business & Other Cool Shots
  • BigAlBigAl Registered Users Posts: 2,294 Major grins
    edited June 3, 2005
    I like the colored one Angelo. Very interesting composition.

    I would maybe have changed the aspect a bit to have her a bit more to left in the pic (so she's got more open space in the direction her body is facing).

    regards
    alan
    Birds
    Bugs
    Spiders
    Flowers
  • leebaseleebase Registered Users Posts: 630 Major grins
    edited June 3, 2005
    Like the shot. Would crop more on the top and right...putting her eyes on the 1/3 line and her body closer to the right.

    You'd still have a lot of the flower...but would increase her interest in the photo.

    Lee
  • Yuri PautovYuri Pautov Registered Users Posts: 1,918 Major grins
    edited June 3, 2005
    Angelo wrote:
    ...but how'd I do?

    Please meet Lily.

    Like your 'model', Angelo.
    I always try to make about 50-100 shots in different poses with different backgrounds - to choose from later...
    In this case, I think I'd recomment her to stand sideways and turn her head to the camera ....
    ... something like... (sorry for posting here...)
    2281.jpg
    Such poses makes one look narrower (sorry for my English).
    I like color version much more.
    As for the composition - try different crops - your eyes will tell you when you'll get the right crop...
    And in the end. I sometimes get something I dont know what to do with... (I mean shots).
    In this case I use optikvervelabs filters in PS (www.optikvervelabs.com - free download). They realy help me!
    Good work!
    Spasibo,
    Yuri
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