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Muench Workshops Spring Fling! Critique Thread

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    Marc MuenchMarc Muench Registered Users Posts: 1,420 Major grins
    edited May 27, 2009
    Ben,

    So glad to see you posted a few of your images. I agree with Schmoo and Ian that the Poppy shot is greatwings.gif You certainly captured the right light in the transition between the shade and sun, good jobthumb.gif


    I did not want to even discuss any post work because the light is so good it just works. However, I believe a tighter crop is a bit more interesting.

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    I also thought this image works well as a pano
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    I am glad you posted the other two images but I believe these two are the stronger because of the subject, light and composition. If you took others of the sun rising I would be curious to see them. Just making sure you picked the right onethumb.gif
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    PindyPindy Registered Users Posts: 1,089 Major grins
    edited May 27, 2009
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    Fantastic—you could wander around that hillside for hours but once you got your eye in the viewfinder, you couldn't get a clump of flowers without a dead-spot like this for love or money. That, combined with the fact you magically made some clouds appear overhead. Great light!
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    BenRGBenRG Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins
    edited May 27, 2009
    Thanks for the advice, I like the sunrise as a pano much more after seeing it that way.

    Here's a few more of the sunrise (although the first two are before the actual sunrise):

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    And the actual sunrise:
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    Post-sunrise:
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    Marc MuenchMarc Muench Registered Users Posts: 1,420 Major grins
    edited May 28, 2009
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    Very good mood, I like the moon but maybe a tad too centered. When you shoot something like this consider taking several. One to the left and one to the right and so on. Even though you might not like what you are shooting at first, it is a good exercise in composition.



    And the actual sunrise:
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    Thought you might have more of this scene and with more exciting wave action. If you process this the same as the other that I cropped it should look even betterthumb.gif

    WTG Benwings.gif
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    PindyPindy Registered Users Posts: 1,089 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2009
    DavidTO... the clock's ticking.

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    tick tick tick...



    Bring it!!
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    schmooschmoo Registered Users Posts: 8,468 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2009
    Pindy wrote:
    DavidTO... the clock's ticking.

    tick tick tick...





    tick tick tick...



    Bring it!!

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    DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited June 10, 2009
    schmoo wrote:
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    I haven't even looked at them yet!
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    ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,910 moderator
    edited June 10, 2009
    DavidTO wrote:
    I haven't even looked at them yet!
    Dude. Get the boy to do it. He seems to have a good eye.
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