Darren Troy CRegistered UsersPosts: 1,927Major grins
edited April 26, 2009
FWIW....this is only how I see them...
#1. Seems like your AF caught the leading edge of the stool....it's a bit sharper than her face is. Is that a Tat on the hand or a reminder of her night out?
#2. The fact that her shirt is caught up on her....ahem....."cheek"...bugs me a little but that entirely could be my own vision of what I would like to see from this shot. This one, for me, is the strongest of the group.
#3. Her pose is pretty cool but the rib cage gives her a very awkward look. She may have been trying to create a tight stomach but because she is topless, the trailing edge of her rib cage elongates the transition between her breast and her rib section, making for a very weird looking "flattening" of this particular bodypart.
NICE! I LOVE 2, I really like what she is doing with her hands , it makes her hair look cool, and the fact that her shirt is a bit askew adds a nice little zing for me.
Oh and the pose makes her shoulders and back look muscular and very fit as she is indeed.
VayCayMom: Yeah #2 is my fav as well and I do like the shirt bunched up a bit, the wrinkles are cool and it makes it look like she's got some junk in the trunk ahha. For the hair I used a plugin called LucisArt 3 ED (enhance detail) to sharpen and lighten it up a bit then maked out the rest of the image, same in #1 also.
Idlewild: yeah the focus might be a lil off in #1 but I loved the pose. And #3 her tummy does look a lil sucked in too much, I agree
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#1. Seems like your AF caught the leading edge of the stool....it's a bit sharper than her face is. Is that a Tat on the hand or a reminder of her night out?
#2. The fact that her shirt is caught up on her....ahem....."cheek"...bugs me a little but that entirely could be my own vision of what I would like to see from this shot. This one, for me, is the strongest of the group.
#3. Her pose is pretty cool but the rib cage gives her a very awkward look. She may have been trying to create a tight stomach but because she is topless, the trailing edge of her rib cage elongates the transition between her breast and her rib section, making for a very weird looking "flattening" of this particular bodypart.
Oh and the pose makes her shoulders and back look muscular and very fit as she is indeed.
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VayCayMom: Yeah #2 is my fav as well and I do like the shirt bunched up a bit, the wrinkles are cool and it makes it look like she's got some junk in the trunk ahha. For the hair I used a plugin called LucisArt 3 ED (enhance detail) to sharpen and lighten it up a bit then maked out the rest of the image, same in #1 also.
Idlewild: yeah the focus might be a lil off in #1 but I loved the pose. And #3 her tummy does look a lil sucked in too much, I agree
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