CC and any input appreciated on an ad..

JackieHollowJackieHollow Registered Users Posts: 30 Big grins
edited April 30, 2009 in Mind Your Own Business
Hey all. I'm placing an ad in the local high school's football programs. It's a way for the football team and cheerleaders to raise money. Anyway, I'm taking out a 1/2 page ad (which is half a 5x7). Everything is printed in black and white, so I just designed it that way to begin with.. I was just wondering if you would give me any feedback on this?? These will be printed up in every program all season long.

One other thing.. do you think I should delete one of the pictures (possibly the bottom right?) and put a "special" or some sort of promo in??
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  • SnowgirlSnowgirl Registered Users Posts: 2,155 Major grins
    edited April 30, 2009
    Personally I think the "Go Eagles" detracts from your message. Placing the ad is supporting the team but that text just breaks the flow of your ad.
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  • JackieHollowJackieHollow Registered Users Posts: 30 Big grins
    edited April 30, 2009
    Thanks Snowgirl! I will look at possibly changing that up somehow. :)
  • Cygnus StudiosCygnus Studios Registered Users Posts: 2,294 Major grins
    edited April 30, 2009
    Are you supporting the school or advertising for potential business? At a casual glance by an average person it could simply be a nice support move.
    I would not necessarily place a price list or coupon, but I would put something about senior portraits or something to that effect.
    Take the center pic on the bottom and move it to the top left and run some type of print where the bottom photos are. You could place smaller photos on either side of the print.
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