Challenges - Part 2
TonyCooper
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In my first post about the difficulty in shooting a track meet, I mention not being able to compose the image and taking what you get. The first image captures the baton pass, but the middle figure is a meaningless part of the image. There's always a third figure (or more) in a tight race, though.
The second image would be better if the knocked-off bar was in the image, but I kinda like the suspended in space aspect.
In the third image, I just like her socks. She's stylin'.
The second image would be better if the knocked-off bar was in the image, but I kinda like the suspended in space aspect.
In the third image, I just like her socks. She's stylin'.
Tony Cooper - Orlando, Florida
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The biggest thing I see in all 3 images is they all look way over processed - oversharpened, oversaturated and loss of detail. Not sure how much you cropped the photos as that can contribute greatly to the issues I'm seeing. Beyond that, you may want to consider your camera settings and/or post processing.
The next issue you'll have to address if you want to get better results is dealing with backgrounds. The backgrounds in the first two shots are very distracting. That's going to be tough to accomplish with the short lens you're currently using. It's just not designed for sports work - the backgrounds and deep dof are one of the fall-outs (as iis the need to heavily crop). It's an unfortunate fact about sports shooting - it often requires some expensive gear. No one is saying you need to run out and buy the 400mm 2.8 but you should strongly consider maybe a Sigma 70-200 2.8 or 100-300 f4. Even if you have to go budget basement and get the Nikon 70-300 - you'll see an improvement in quality by having a telephoto lens.
So shot 1 - biggest problems are distracting background, and the general IQ issues I mentioned above.
Shot 2 - very akward position. The biggest issue is that faces are important - you want to capture them in 90% of your shots. But you also want to capture the peak action - for pole vault it's as he's going over the bar. As it is, the vaulter's butt is pretty much the focal point and that's not very flattering.
Best of luck in your next outing.
If you read my first post - "Challenges" - you'll see that the problems you've discussed are what I brought up. I see the problems, but don't know how to get around them.
I'm shooting in early afternoon in bright Florida sun. Not the best time to shoot, but the venue decides the time. I don't know how I can control background because the venue controls where I shoot from. Spectators are fenced off from participants. I couldn't even position myself for good horizontal angles, let alone vertical ones where I was shooting up get sky instead of field and bleachers.
I was using a 55/200 lens; the longest I own. Naturally, I'd like to own a longer lens, but not specifically for sports photography.
Also, as I pointed out in my first post, it's not my intent to become a sports event photographer. This is a first-time attempt at a track meet. I just look for subjects and activities that are interesting to me that I haven't done before. Often, when I photograph something I've not done before, I'll look at the first attempt's result and go back and shoot differently the second time. Since track season is over, I won't be able to do that in this case.
Over-saturated and over-sharpened I can control. I shoot RAW and post-process in CSR. I don't see the over-sharpening or over-saturating, but that's why I post photos here. I want to know how others see the photographs. I'd like more specific comments about where these show up.
Cropping...at the end of this I'll add the full image as it came out of the camera with no adjustments. Tell me how I could better crop it.
The pole vaulter...I do have some shots of a vaulter clearing, or knocking over, the bar- and with faces - but this one seemed more interesting. Personal choice. The others just didn't appeal to me even though they were more conventional shots. Remember, I'm not looking for sports photographs; I'm looking for interesting photographs.
I really hate people who whine and defend their photographs when they are criticized, and I don't want to sound like that. My "defense" is more to explain the conditions rather the defend the results. If you are so inclined, I'd like more specific comments on the flaws. I want to be able to see what others see.
Here's the full, untouched, uncropped image. It's only been re-sized from 3040 x 2014 to 2400 x 1596 so it will load. I cropped to show the runners and to leave space ahead of them.
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Thanks for posting this shot - it explains most of your quality issues. You can't crop the image that much. When framing in landscape orientation you want to fill about 3/4 of the vertical frame with your subject. You've filled only about 1/4 of it. Really the shot needs to be initially framed about as loosel as your final crop.
While you can't control where you shoot from you can control how you use your equipment. This shot was taken at 55mm - should have been taken at full 200mm.
Using the full zoom will not only improve the quality issues you have it will also blur the background more.
On a less important note - be careful - that's exactly how your post came across. Anyone here who is trying to help you is fully aware the time of day track meets are held. We're fully aware of the distances involved. That's the benefit of posting on a sports forum and getting advice from people who actually have experience shooting what you're trying to shoot. We've run into the same challenges you are now.
Tony - I can understand that. But there is room for improvement even with the equipment you have. My advice is - if you aren't interested in critique from sports photographers, you shouldn't post your photos in a sports forum - post them in a gear forum where every shot taken from the camera the people in that forum use is considered a good shot. One of the great things about this forum is there are a lot of good shooters here. People who take time to share their experience and help others get better. Very much like good camera clubs. It's not a mutual admiration society (which doesn't help anyone get better).
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Yes, I did shoot from that first curve by the snack bar. I just didn't get a good photograph from there. I could get the runners, but I didn't get a shot that I liked. I got some nice, sharp photos with uninteresting (to me) content. As JohnG pointed out, I was shooting too wide and trying to crop to what I liked. Next time I'll shoot tighter.
If you scroll up to SoonerShawn's photos, you'll see the type of photograph that I like: the blonde girl going over the hurdle and the pole vaulter. I'm not interested in capturing sports; I'm interested in capturing people engaged in sports. I like the expressions, the intensity, and the positions.
I'd be happy to come away from a track meet with an interesting photo of a spectator or competitor relaxing between events. It just didn't happen for me that day.
I did walk around to the other side of the field. That's where I photographed the pole vaulters. Shot putt and discus events weren't going on when I was there. At least I didn't see them.
Thanks for your comments, though.
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Just in case you get back to Showalter Field this might help:
http://www.fhsaa.org/tr/state_map.pdf
Isn't sports photography just photographing people in a particular setting? And, photography made a little more difficult because the setting poses challenges?
In this morning's _Orlando Sentinel_ the photographs of the meet are all of single competitors shot close and tight to show expressions and intensity. The shot of Vanessa Anthony clearing a hurdle is a people shot in a sports setting.
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"Shoot tight, crop tighter"
This of course in regards to sports photography.
I hate sometimes clipping body parts, but even those shots, cropped right, can turn into interesting and good shots. Sometimes.
Also seems to be the most important advice you are getting here. Especially if you want to show emotion on the athlete. Got to get in close enough to see facial expressions and most importantly the eyes.