#24 Need Some Eyes on These

hawkeye978

Could use a collective opinion and C&C on these for the next challenge.

#1



#2



You play with these so long you lose all perspective.

All opinions appreciated.

Velvet-Art

I have to say I prefer #1, #2 has just too much in darkness that makes me strain my eyes to try and make any detail out.

Tim

dnie

#1

hawkeye978

Thanks for the comments Tim and dnie.

Flyinggina

I just saw your entry in the Entry Gallery and think it is beautiful. I think you should stick with it!

Virginia

hawkeye978

Flyinggina wrote:

I just saw your entry in the Entry Gallery and think it is beautiful. I think you should stick with it!

Virginia

Thanks, Virginia.

Katmitchell

Hi Hawkeye
I like number one.. The composition is more open and comfortable..
The only thing I can nit pick here is that the grass in the foreground upfront to the left is a little blown out and unnaturally bright and that stands out a little because the rest of the composition is a natural dim color..
Maybe crop a little on the bottom, just a little to reduce the brightness or perhaps you could burn it in very "mildly" in Photoshop. Just make sure you keep your tolerance on the brush down to a 4% or lower opacity and your brush hardeness turned all the way down if you use burn.


Nice Work and Good Luck To You..


Kat