suggestions

joshhuntnm

I was playing with this while the family was watching a movie i wasn't too interested. I feel like I am getting some where, but not quite there. Ideas? suggestions?

Moogle Pepper

I would try to get some of that blur in the groom out. Around his head, you can see double.

Scott_Quier

With respect, sir, this appears to be an attempt to rescue a photo that should probably feel right at home in the dustbin.

That aside, the blur effect is over done and I don't know what you've done to his hair and her arm, but I don't think that's working.

studio1972

I agree with the other guys, but maybe if you sorted out those strange blurs on the B&G and cropped it square and tighter to them, I think that would help.

Swartzy

The idea is a good one Josh...the perspective is interesting..but...that bride should not be shot from that angle either...nothing flattering about that..the blur won't save this shot.....dustbin (good on ya Scott)...I was gonna say Biz-Bag...

I'm sure you have others Josh that would be more flattering to do creative post work with.

Cantfeelmyfingers

I think it's interesting. Other than the weird blur on the groom, I think it's a keeper. At least a neat image to throw in the album!

joshhuntnm

Cantfeelmyfingers wrote:

I think it's interesting. Other than the weird blur on the groom, I think it's a keeper. At least a neat image to throw in the album!

the weird blur was actually added in, is on a layer so easily removed. i was (obviously, trying to create a sense of motion I I thought a bit of (I think it was a ripple? filter or something like that) I think there is a destination to a cool shot here if I could just find it.