The composition works and nice strong B&W post. But not enough of a story. People aren't really engaged with each other or the camera. What if the waiter was there?
I think these can be really difficult to do though usually there is a time at a table with so many people like the one on the right where someone inevitably says something that everyone bursts out laughing and that I think is the type of interaction you need with a shot like this. It brings you in and makes you wonder what was so funny and nostalgic as to the last time you enjoyed a dinner out with friends and family. It is a nice capture none the less! I love the North End.
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