DSS #25 Possible Image
Halite
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Any thoughts positive or negative on this image? I'm thinking foul weather here. I've got some other ideas that I hope to try, but never know whether schedule will allow. Thanks for any C&C.
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Maybe if you called it "Abandoned" or "Interrupted" it would reinforce the foul weather concept.
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Unfortunately, like Marikris said, I'm not getting a sense of "foul" with this because it's so eye catching.
Perhaps a high contrast black & white of this image would give that "foul" feeling...
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Whoa Aaron, control yourself.
I like it Halite and agree with the title "Fair Weather Friends". Good luck.
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I love it too. My first impression of the theme was "foul weather" but would need to eliminate the challenge word and come up with something else... just my 2 cents
Thanks Aaron. The absence of capital letters in the statement demonstrates some remnants of self-control remain.
Thank you all for your comments.
Wonderful and energetic shot.. however, it is too pretty to make the "foul" impression here... I mean you have managed to make the weather look beautiful here.. I do like it a lot... this would have been a great entry for the energy round....
it is so energetic and colorful..
perhaps ugly it up a little with a black and white conversion or a Sepia tone or something like that? if you could shoot it again, it would speak more for what you are saying if there would have been some handbags on the ground and coffee cups or food abandoned on the table to signify that the weather ruined something pleasant.. like a gathering of friends..
just my opinion...
Kat