keeper or toss?

joshhuntnmjoshhuntnm Registered Users Posts: 1,924 Major grins
edited May 19, 2009 in Weddings
I couldn't see the folds in the curtain were creating weird lines till I got it on a big screen. Bummer I would have like this shot. What do you think? Keep it or toss it?

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  • dawssvtdawssvt Registered Users Posts: 413 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    Keep it for sure. I think it gives it a unique look :D

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  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    Some people will probably really like the shot.
    Each person views things differently.

    For me that would be a toss.
  • AndyAndy Registered Users Posts: 50,016 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    Toss. She's got a separated arm and there's complete lack of any detail at her left-ear area. And there really should be some separation of her hair from the bg.
  • momwacmomwac Registered Users Posts: 65 Big grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    Yeah, bummer
    :cry I'd have to say toss, too. Her expression is pleasing and the dress detail is nice, but the disembodied ear and the skunk stripe on her forehead (as well as the very bright highlight falling on the corner of her left eye) are distracting.
  • Ed911Ed911 Registered Users Posts: 1,306 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    Toss...I didn't go into detail as for the rest of the shot...but the shadows on her face are very disconcerting.
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  • elizabeth_Lunaelizabeth_Luna Registered Users Posts: 308 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    Looking at it a 2nd time I would say toss. Pretty much agree with what has already been said.
  • FedererPhotoFedererPhoto Registered Users Posts: 312 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    If you ever have to ask if you should toss a shot or not... the answer is already there.

    Toss that sucka. (though I don't dislike it for the reasons those above me said -- for me it's all about the weird brighter line across her face)
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  • joshhuntnmjoshhuntnm Registered Users Posts: 1,924 Major grins
    edited May 14, 2009
    If you ever have to ask if you should toss a shot or not... the answer is already there.

    Toss that sucka. (though I don't dislike it for the reasons those above me said -- for me it's all about the weird brighter line across her face)

    I tend to err the other way--it costs nothing to give them the pic. On the off chance she likes it, she has it; otherwise she can toss it.

    It was a learning experience -- straighten out the curtains!! (that is what is causing the lines.
  • ElaineElaine Registered Users Posts: 3,532 Major grins
    edited May 15, 2009
    I've gotta be honest...I kinda like it! If the line on her face were the only one, then yeah, that would be bad. But since there are a couple other lines there, it's obvious the light is streaming through something, and that's not so bad to me. What would have made this really work are the two extremes, IMO...either no lines at all, or lots more of them. The dress details are lovely and so is her smile. thumb.gif It's hard to say if she'll like it.
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  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited May 15, 2009
    joshhuntnm wrote:
    I tend to err the other way--it costs nothing to give them the pic. On the off chance she likes it, she has it; otherwise she can toss it.

    It was a learning experience -- straighten out the curtains!! (that is what is causing the lines.

    I have to agree with federer..if you are unsure then it is a toss. But my threshold is rather high. I woudl rather give clients much fewer photos of greater quality. My thought is a few bad photos can really take the punch out of continuity of a set...though sometimes you can't help it if it is the only shot of a particular setting or person, etc.
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  • beetle8beetle8 Registered Users Posts: 677 Major grins
    edited May 15, 2009
    Ultimately Josh, it's your decision,
    You are a great photographer, and have a much better experience range then I in the wedding arena. With that being said, I'm going to disagree with you on the statement "it costs nothing to give it to them" as I stated above it is (or should be) your decision, if you give them your shots thinking "eh if she doesn't like it then she can toss it" you might as well give her the lot and let her cull them, essentially there is no difference. If you like the shot and feel it is worthy of presenting then you should at least hope that she likes it.
    my opinion on the shot,
    I agree with Andy, with the addition of the head is turned slightly too much to the right, so the clipping in the right eye kinda makes a jagged cut in the face
  • lyttlevietlyttleviet Registered Users Posts: 62 Big grins
    edited May 16, 2009
    I like it :).
  • GemGemGemGem Registered Users Posts: 355 Major grins
    edited May 16, 2009
    I think you should show it to her. I like it. It kind of makes her look slender and mysterious..
    If she doesn't like it, she doesn't have to buy it.

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  • ShimaShima Registered Users Posts: 2,547 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2009
    joshhuntnm wrote:
    I tend to err the other way--it costs nothing to give them the pic. On the off chance she likes it, she has it; otherwise she can toss it.

    It was a learning experience -- straighten out the curtains!! (that is what is causing the lines.

    I do the same thing, this is why when I shoot weddings I can't do what some people do and only give the "top 300" shots from the whole day... if it's junk it gets tossed, if it might have value to them or something I think is "different" it stays.

    That being said, I like that this is "different" and I'd keep it.
  • Scott_QuierScott_Quier Registered Users Posts: 6,524 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    Toss it - for all the reasons already outlined, it's not that good.

    As for this statements ....
    joshhuntnm wrote:
    I tend to err the other way--it costs nothing to give them the pic. On the off chance she likes it, she has it; otherwise she can toss it.

    It was a learning experience -- straighten out the curtains!! (that is what is causing the lines.

    This is just flat wrong. In business, there are many liabilitis, cost, and assessts. One asset you have is your reputation - For a photographer, this might be lumped with portfolio. Basically, if a client sees some of you work that is not up to your usual standard, it's the poorer shots that they will remember and talk about. That will, eventually, impact on your business.
  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,940 moderator
    edited May 19, 2009
    Toss it. One thing I notice is that the lighting makes the image look flat (and like an alien because of the stripe). The shadow isn't very complimentary either. On a positive note, she's got a wonderful smile.
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  • MitchellMitchell Registered Users Posts: 3,503 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    Toss it - for all the reasons already outlined, it's not that good.

    As for this statements ....


    This is just flat wrong. In business, there are many liabilitis, cost, and assessts. One asset you have is your reputation - For a photographer, this might be lumped with portfolio. Basically, if a client sees some of you work that is not up to your usual standard, it's the poorer shots that they will remember and talk about. That will, eventually, impact on your business.

    This is very true.

    Some people tend to fixate on the negatives. An otherwise great set of photos could be remembered as the bridal shot that got ruined by crazy shadows.

    I like to present only my best.
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