Nursing Graduate Pics

pixelsoftime

It's been a while since I have posted anything, so here goes. These are some pics from a recent graduation shoot for a young lady named Marjan. I want to improve my work so go ahead and rip these apart. Thanks, Ty

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rwells

Hello Ty,

I don't think there's going to be any ripping your pics apart , but in reply to your C&C:


IMHO, pic #1 is a great concept. For my eye, the subject is too centered in the shot. If the right side bg was lit, I would crop off the left side. Also, those are hard shadows on her face. You might try some fill to lighten them up.

#2 pose looks good, but again, hard shadows on the face.

#3 Hard facial shadows again, and for me, the subject is too centered.

Thanks for posting and I look forward to seeing more of your work

Twisted Image

No complaints here...

Great shots of a beautiful girl...

RBrogen

rwells wrote:

Hello Ty,

I don't think there's going to be any ripping your pics apart , but in reply to your C&C:


IMHO, pic #1 is a great concept. For my eye, the subject is too centered in the shot. If the right side bg was lit, I would crop off the left side. Also, those are hard shadows on her face. You might try some fill to lighten them up.

#2 pose looks good, but again, hard shadows on the face.

#3 Hard facial shadows again, and for me, the subject is too centered.

Thanks for posting and I look forward to seeing more of your work