Critique please?

jandrewnelsonjandrewnelson Registered Users Posts: 300 Major grins
edited May 17, 2009 in Other Cool Shots
Taken on the streets of Asheville, NC.

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Thanks for your comments and suggestions

Jerry Nelson
www.JourneyAmerica.org

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  • Jack'll doJack'll do Registered Users Posts: 2,977 Major grins
    edited May 17, 2009
    Hi Jerry
    I think I would crop out the pedestrian to the point where you have the concrete base centered. The asymmetry of the sculpture would help avoid an overall centered look. Also if you could reshoot with a narrower DOF that would bring out the sculptures (maybe increase the contrast also). The smudge at the middle left edge is a bit distracting. I think this image has a lot of potential.
    jrg.smugmug.com

    Jack
    (My real name is John but Jack'll do)
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