Some outdoor shots...

Tim KamppinenTim Kamppinen Registered Users Posts: 816 Major grins
edited May 20, 2009 in People
A month or so ago I got my friend Kristin to model for me. I finally got around to editing the shots, and here they are. These are some of my first outdoor portraits. I'm more used to indoor "studio" type shots where I'm totally in control of the light so there was a lot of experimenting going on here as far as balancing flash and ambient and so forth.

All except 4 and 6 were lit with an sb-600 through a shoot through umbrella. #5 had a CTO gel on the flash and tungsten WB... I've since concluded that a full CTO is way too much for this... the red channel was blown all over in the skin tones and took a bunch of annoying work to correct. One thing I'm finding is that I really like tilted compositions for portraits. I find it makes the shots seem more dynamic and interesting, and sometimes it will emphasize the subject by making their surroundings/background more abstract. The problem is I have a hard time remembering to do it in-camera. All of these were shot pretty much level and cropped every which way. I really want to get to the point where I just compose it in camera the way I want it to end up, because I'm wasting valuable pixels by cropping away large parts of the image.

As always, I'd be grateful for any comments and suggestions you guys have.

(If the pics don't show up on a work computer it's probably because they're linked from facebook. It's just a lot easier than turning on external links, turning on sharing, copying all the urls and then turning it off again on my website... I wish there was an "owner share" button on the pics... does anyone know an easier way around this?)

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4. (This one is available light only, right around sunset)

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6. (Actually I took this one while we were at an open-mic night... that's one of the candles that were on the tables)

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Comments

  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2009
    that is some good stuff Tim.thumb.gif
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  • DeuceFourDeuceFour Registered Users Posts: 350 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    Wow!! These are gorgeous! #2 and #5 are my favorites! Thanks for sharing a little on your setup too. I agree about the tilt composition, sometimes, I catch myself overdoing it with the camera when a shot calls for just a plain jane straight and level capture. But yeah, it feels awkward at first tilting your camera at those angles, but you get past that ;) Again, very very well done!!!

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  • SnowgirlSnowgirl Registered Users Posts: 2,155 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    I like #4 the best (available light only) - the colour range at sunset is gorgeous and really "lights up" your lovely model.
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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    These are lovely. Beautiful gal and light, and super shots.

    My only question... all of them except # 3 and #6 look rather soft. I know that your images are usually tack-sharp, so I'm wondering what's going on ... is it the processing maybe? My monitor is calibrated, fwiw, but rather small (laptop).
  • Tim KamppinenTim Kamppinen Registered Users Posts: 816 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    divamum wrote:
    These are lovely. Beautiful gal and light, and super shots.

    My only question... all of them except # 3 and #6 look rather soft. I know that your images are usually tack-sharp, so I'm wondering what's going on ... is it the processing maybe? My monitor is calibrated, fwiw, but rather small (laptop).

    Thanks. The softness could be a few things. #4 actually is fairly soft. I shot it with my 18-200 VR, not the sharpest lens in the world, at 200mm, 1/100 and 5.6 which is wide open at that end. It's also cropped quite a bit (as I said I need to do a better job of cropping in-camera) and the ISO was at 400. So yeah, that one's just straight up soft, unfortunately. I want a Nikkor 80-200 2.8 sooo bad...

    #5 was shot with the tamron 28-75 at 75mm and 2.8, so the DOF is pretty narrow. It's a little soft wide open. The eyes look fairly sharp but it's possible the focus wasn't dead on for this one, as well.

    The rest are actually really sharp when viewed at 100% on my monitor, so I'm guessing that facebook's crappy compression algorithm is to blame for any softness in those shots. The other thing is that the processing on a few of them gives the impression of softness overall but they're actually sharp up close in the details.
  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    The rest are actually really sharp when viewed at 100% on my monitor, so I'm guessing that facebook's crappy compression algorithm is to blame for any softness in those shots.

    That's exactly what it is, I bet - I didn't see that in your initial post (that'll teach me to skim the text to get to the pictures), so wrist-smack to me!
  • Tim KamppinenTim Kamppinen Registered Users Posts: 816 Major grins
    edited May 19, 2009
    divamum wrote:
    That's exactly what it is, I bet - I didn't see that in your initial post (that'll teach me to skim the text to get to the pictures), so wrist-smack to me!

    No problem, I'm glad you said something. When I went back to look at the shots again, I noticed that in #6 there was some weird blotchy areas that looked like they had been desaturated on her cheek in the shadows. I have no idea how that happened or how I managed to miss it, but I went back and fixed it in the original and uploaded the fixed version to both my website and facebook... I think sometimes when I'm editing/retouching photos I get so absorbed in the minute details that I forget to step back and look at the overall scheme of things... which results in missing stuff like that. Not good at all!
  • VayCayMomVayCayMom Registered Users Posts: 1,870 Major grins
    edited May 20, 2009
    I LOVE # 6, very intriguing.
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  • lyttlevietlyttleviet Registered Users Posts: 62 Big grins
    edited May 20, 2009
    I love the poses and expressions. She seems very comfortable. The editing has a bit too much contrast for my taste though.
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