My Heart & Soul

Darren Troy C

Tim Kamppinen

I like this shot, but perhaps it could use a little warming? It seems rather cool to me.

Scott_Quier

Art Scott

nice photo....but needs more contrast....her face seems almost washed out..............

Darren Troy C

She's very fair-skinned and I was trying to convey that along with a bit of destauration thrown in.....maybe it doesn't work too well for this image. I re-worked it a bit......any better?

Tim Kamppinen

Now it looks oversaturated to me... maybe a middle road between these two? Sorry to be so demanding...

whiterice

This is really a great pose, cute kid!

I agree with Tim, there must be something in between. You've lost all the detail in the eyes with this latest version.

momwac

So sweet and pretty, with skin like a china doll... may I try? Very gentle S curves in the a and b channels -- more in b than in a. Will take this down pronto if you like, just say the word.

Mike J

whiterice wrote:

This is really a great pose, cute kid!

I agree with Tim, there must be something in between. You've lost all the detail in the eyes with this latest version.

Definitely something to worth working on

Darren Troy C

Good job, MOMWAC. I like a touch more warmth after my 2nd edit, but I like what you've done also. She's a cutie, I think I'll keep her!

whiterice

Idlewild wrote:

Good job, MOMWAC. I like a touch more warmth after my 2nd edit, but I like what you've done also. She's a cutie, I think I'll keep her!

I really like this version - you've achieved softness and vibrancy at the same time. Nicely done MOMWAC.