Fly #2

windozewindoze Registered Users Posts: 2,830 Major grins
edited June 17, 2005 in Holy Macro
not as detailed, but i was after composition.....
opinions welcomed!
troy
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  • TristanPTristanP Registered Users Posts: 1,107 Major grins
    edited June 16, 2005
    Works for me. I like it.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited June 17, 2005
    Looked at it scrolled away came back
    1st thing came to mind was a little more contrast, otherwise another winner thumb.gif
  • Lord VetinariLord Vetinari Registered Users Posts: 15,901 Major grins
    edited June 17, 2005
    Yup like it a lot- as previously mentioned think it would be better if darkened a tad.

    Brian V.
  • nzmacronzmacro Registered Users Posts: 200 Major grins
    edited June 17, 2005
    You've been playing with the thirds and perspective huh, well it worked. Nice balanced in this almost squared crop. Have to love the subject with those gorgeous metallic colours Troy. The curves and lines work well and you have a great separation from the background. Darker, hmmm, worth a try but as is its fine as well.

    All the best Troy, nicely balanced this one thumb.gif

    Danny.
  • DeeDee Registered Users Posts: 2,981 Major grins
    edited June 17, 2005
    Ditto what Danny said
    nzmacro wrote:
    You've been playing with the thirds and perspective huh, well it worked. Nice balanced in this almost squared crop. Have to love the subject with those gorgeous metallic colours Troy. The curves and lines work well and you have a great separation from the background. Darker, hmmm, worth a try but as is its fine as well.

    All the best Troy, nicely balanced this one thumb.gif

    Danny.

    This would make a lovely print as is, soft colors, iridescent glimmers on the wings of the fly -- but for the web, I'd pump up the contrast just a little.

    I really love the colors, and the tip of the leaf leading away from the fly brings the eye back to the fly -- clap.gif
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