Wedding Shoot

soloshootersoloshooter Registered Users Posts: 46 Big grins
edited June 22, 2009 in Weddings
Here is a pic of last week's wedding of a young couple, I would like to get any C & C from the masses...565255502_xLfGM-L-1.jpg566221358_CXSe6-L-1.jpg565255591_LJ4e2-L-1.jpg

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  • mercphotomercphoto Registered Users Posts: 4,550 Major grins
    edited June 22, 2009
    Nice composition in the first shot, but the bride isn't smiling. Also, we can't see the bride's hand and that all-important ring. Careful with the crop next time. Second shot doesn't do much for me. That third shot, exposure is way off, white balance is way off. You really need to fix that.
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited June 22, 2009
    Here is a pic of last week's wedding of a young couple, I would like to get any C & C from the masses...565255502_xLfGM-L-1.jpg566221358_CXSe6-L-1.jpg565255591_LJ4e2-L-1.jpg


    Second and third shots are very nice, but I'm thrown by the color of the third. As to the first - I would definitely lose it...the bride looks like she wants to kill the groom or the photographer. mwink.gif (But nice pose, and great of the groom.)
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