C&C On shot from Shoot

Coleman Photography

A picture from a shoot i had. C&C welcome.

bendruckerphoto

The eyes look overprocessed and unnatural. I'm also not a huge fan of the pose/crop. It makes her shoulders look very broad. Overall, pretty good.

D'Buggs

bendruckerphoto wrote:

The eyes look overprocessed and unnatural. I'm also not a huge fan of the pose/crop. It makes her shoulders look very broad. Overall, pretty good.

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Any others?

Coleman Photography

hey guys was woundering if anyone thought this is a tad underexposed.

bendruckerphoto

Coleman Photography wrote:

hey guys was woundering if anyone thought this is a tad underexposed.

On my calibrated monitor, it is. Maybe by 1/3 stop.

rwells

Coleman Photography wrote:

hey guys was woundering if anyone thought this is a tad underexposed.

Not sure I'd say underexposed, but it does look a little flat to me.

Coleman Photography

any suggestions on poping the color

Miguel Delinquento

too orange
I like the pose enough. It's a unusual enough to catch my attention. The lighting is flat, but that may change to some extent if you can get the white balance straightened out. On my calibrated IPS monitor her skin looks too orange. The contrast between the white straps and her skin is excellent though.

M

Coleman Photography

did a few changes to it. more c&c welcome.

WingsOfLovePhoto

definately too orange on my calibrated monitor and is that her real eye color? looks orangy too... a little underexposed and flat. I like the bokeh and the hair blowing...that is a nice touch. Pretty model....

rwells

That looks better to me, and I certainly like the new crop. Especially that it takes her out of the center of the image.

Keep up the good work

Coleman Photography wrote:

did a few changes to it. more c&c welcome.

Flutist

Coleman Photography wrote:

did a few changes to it. more c&c welcome.

Now looks out of focus to me? and her tanned skin, yes orangey

Coleman Photography

i did not do any changes to the skin she is a very tan girl and has that sort of complection. not for sure why it seems out of focus dont not on my computer. and i did not anything from the first to the second that would have caused it. Anyway thanks for the c&c guys im really learning alot

Trevlan

It looks a bit underexposed to me. Didn't see the original, but this crop works fne.