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Emily (16 yr old daughter)

GoofBcktGoofBckt Registered Users Posts: 481 Major grins
edited July 8, 2009 in People
Took approx 100 shots of my daughter the other day. About 15 of which turned out ok. Here's a sampling for critique. Thank you. :)

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    Gary752Gary752 Registered Users Posts: 934 Major grins
    edited July 6, 2009
    Nice shot! But I think it would be better if you had gotten a little closer and captured more eye details (no catch lights). This would naturally eliminate some of the background, causing a closer crop of the subject.

    GaryB
    GaryB
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    GoofBcktGoofBckt Registered Users Posts: 481 Major grins
    edited July 6, 2009
    Thanks, Gary. I appreciate that. You're right.
    BroPhoto wrote:
    Nice shot! But I think it would be better if you had gotten a little closer and captured more eye details (no catch lights). This would naturally eliminate some of the background, causing a closer crop of the subject.

    GaryB
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    bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited July 6, 2009
    GoofBckt wrote:
    Thanks, Gary. I appreciate that. You're right.

    Not only wouldn't I worry about catch lights, I'd get rid of the artificial vignetting. You've got a great informal portrait here, with the shoes adding a quirky element that makes the viewer pause and think...'weird bunny ears? Oh! Sneakers! Perfect!' And you've really captured your daughter as a real kid...' Very nice.
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    D'BuggsD'Buggs Registered Users Posts: 958 Major grins
    edited July 6, 2009
    I'm goin' to combine a couple suggestions; How about closing in AND deleting the vignette (?)..... I think it would look a lot sweeter. headscratch.gif


    Charming young Lady, you have there.
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    afev0602afev0602 Registered Users Posts: 166 Major grins
    edited July 8, 2009
    i would have taken the shot at angle from her so you get a bit of her legs..i'm not a fan of the shoes sticking out of her head and prefer seeing where those shoes are connected to...I also really like that the shoes are red, just a nice pop of color in the photo.
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