I like the lines of this shot Neil. The only thing that bugged me was the red "Collect" words at the top right. It was distrcting. B/W those and it would make, for me, a spot on shot.
I like the lines of this shot Neil. The only thing that bugged me was the red "Collect" words at the top right. It was distrcting. B/W those and it would make, for me, a spot on shot.
Much appreciate the feedback, Randy. Thank you! The words partially visible are "Nouveau Collection" - new collection. So they are relevant to the subject of the shot. I emphasised them a bit to make them one of the several color areas patterned into the "sideground" of the figure - eg the pale blue in the opposite top corner, and the green patch in the bottom right corner. Those color areas were meant to add to the interest of the overall desaturated "sideground".
I can sure undersand how if they didn't work for you they would be distracting, so I accept your experience with interest. What I will try in response to your comment is to desaturate that area some. And I am open to what other's think.
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Much appreciate the feedback, Randy. Thank you! The words partially visible are "Nouveau Collection" - new collection. So they are relevant to the subject of the shot. I emphasised them a bit to make them one of the several color areas patterned into the "sideground" of the figure - eg the pale blue in the opposite top corner, and the green patch in the bottom right corner. Those color areas were meant to add to the interest of the overall desaturated "sideground".
I can sure undersand how if they didn't work for you they would be distracting, so I accept your experience with interest. What I will try in response to your comment is to desaturate that area some. And I am open to what other's think.
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